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Death's cold hands left upon my throat
The mark of ends left in souls
The death toll high, uncountable
The numbers worthless in all eyes
Memories a sickness plaguing of heart
The deaths of spirits unknown to many
The hearts are lost and so many unfeeling
The lifeless depths of thoughtless cold
Thankful am I for my own deliverance
But spiteful is my mind of my loneliness
Of all I wish I'd not been spared
Dead am I in heart, another body on the floor
Crying inside but no tears come through
Dying inside from torments of hell
No existence I want if others have none
Deserve I to have my life gone from me
But unlucky am I to have it given back today
Saved from the physical, no end to my life
Burdened by the mental, unbearable strife
But given am I the burden and shall I bear it for all time.
©2007-2009 ~TheBigBangBoom
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Well, this is a poem I wrote 6 years ago and it still remains my favorite so enjoy it, I like criticism good or bad.

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It SUCKS!

lol you know I'm kidding! This was one of my faves too...if I remember that its one you let me read.

--
Women are ment to be loved, not understood." -Oscar Wilde:blackrose:

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